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Reviewer: JulieDcd Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/14/18 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

ooo, I cant wait to read the rest of this!

Reviewer: LoveFox Signed Report
Date: 06/16/15 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Transformation

You thinking about continuing this?

Reviewer: LoveFox Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/30/15 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Transformation

Please Continue.

Reviewer: Zero The Hero Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 05/15/14 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Transformation

Not bad. A little quick, but not bad for your first story. Maybe add a little more detail, but not too much. You got me interested quickly.

Reviewer: Anwest15 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/22/13 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Please finish the story, it seems really great so far

Reviewer: Casey Thompson Signed Report
Date: 06/22/13 09:14 am Title: Chapter 2: The Transformation

Although I wish the chapters were a little longer and more detailed, the story has me hooked. I'm looking forward to see where this will end up.

Reviewer: missanonymusgirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 06/07/13 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Transformation

Wow, I want to read more!

Reviewer: TGWriter Signed Report
Date: 06/04/13 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Thanks, I'll edit this now. I'm about to add some new chapters today.

Reviewer: Gene Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 06/04/13 05:29 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Had that been me and my sister, there'd have been no "put them on or I tell Mom and Dad" It would have been her knocking me the eff out and then telling our parents. But as a story...not a half bad start. I'd like to know more about the siblings, though. Looks, ages maybe, personalities...make me get to know and care about them.

6/10 for Chapter 1

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