Date: 06/04/13 05:29 am Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
Had that been me and my sister, there'd have been no "put them on or I tell Mom and Dad" It would have been her knocking me the eff out and then telling our parents. But as a story...not a half bad start. I'd like to know more about the siblings, though. Looks, ages maybe, personalities...make me get to know and care about them.
6/10 for Chapter 1