Reviews For Adara's Story
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Reviewer: Snarfles Signed Report
Date: 05/31/13 02:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Awesome work Andrea, written in the style of the parables. Gender shift of the spirit and perception without the need to change biology to blend in. If the world were so enlightened....*sigh*

Never stop writing. Too many need to read your work and see your heart.

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/29/13 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice. If only others would listen.

Reviewer: GM Shephard Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/29/13 02:49 am Title: Chapter 1

Hi Andrea,

Wonderful story. I have often wondered what Jesus would say if he walked the Earth today, taking on the righteous religious folk regarding matters relavent to our time. Your use of John 21:25 was genius. I can see a loving transgender woman kneeling at the feet of Jesus, kissing his feet, loving her Lord as her brother tries to claim his righteousness over her. One would not have to imagine this scene taking place today, but over 2,000 years ago, when Jesus walked the Earth during his ministry. Very well done.

Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/28/13 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice!

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