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Reviewer: Lady Yuki Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/10/19 03:05 pm Title: The Big Show and the After Chat

Now this is an ultimate tease. I remember when this story was first written I wanted it to continue, but it seemed that it wasn't to be. Now it comes back only to end again on a cliffhanger. I would love to see this continue to it's conclusion.

Reviewer: okieohio Signed Report
Date: 12/12/18 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good story. May I recommend the use of more white space like a blank line between paragraphs. It will make reading easier.

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