Date: 05/04/13 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
I look forward to more. Good idea, one I have thought about many times. In your creative hands, I am quite confident another masterpiece will emerge.
Author's Response: You're too kind. I haven't yet managed to blend the mundane and the surreal, as the late J G Ballard did so effectively. The vapour trails should have been a recurring motif, visible from the beginning. It was a good metaphor, but I could have made more of it.
Date: 05/03/13 04:57 am Title: Chapter 1
It may not be strict TG but portrays a society where the entire male population is gradually changing gender.
reminds me of a BBC Show with a similar theme "Invasion:Earth"
Men were being feminized over generations leading a terminal drop in sperm count and increasingly female population. The aim was to make the Earth more susceptible to attack but didn't count on females taking on Warrior and Science roles and other forms of reproduction replacing male-female pairing.