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Reviewer: 930310 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/30/16 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very good job! I liked the angle and I enjoyed seeing Stephen and Johnny/Jenny being able to get past the boundaries of gender when it came to friendship. A bit sad that Randy eventually drove Jenny to return to being male. I was hoping that they would decide to stay together since both loved each other and were both lonely in their own ways. Hopefully they will know what to do in the future and who they will be spending it with.

Reviewer: magisterb Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/31/14 02:59 am Title: Chapter 1

A good story! I like your restraint in not making Jenny a voluptuous sexpot or even a bimbo. The mental transformation is quite sexy.

Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/01/13 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Great concept and wonderful handling of it! Very tight little story and the end is essentially perfect. Nicely done, and may this simply be the first of many!

Reviewer: AlexiaRose Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/01/13 02:31 am Title: Chapter 1

There should be a next, I know that. Randy's jealousy could be a great plot device with him having bad karma. I love the romance and hope Jenny can be with Stephen.

Reviewer: touch the light Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 04/29/13 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good idea, nicely executed. A couple of suggestions:

1. Wouldn't it have been more interesting if none of the characters had known what the ring would do?

2. Why not try a transformation that only affects the body? It would lend it that little bit more credibility, and give you the opportunity to indulge in some wry humour. "There's something different about you, dude. I could've sworn you hadn't shaved since this morning." That sort of thing.

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