Date: 01/30/16 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very good job! I liked the angle and I enjoyed seeing Stephen and Johnny/Jenny being able to get past the boundaries of gender when it came to friendship. A bit sad that Randy eventually drove Jenny to return to being male. I was hoping that they would decide to stay together since both loved each other and were both lonely in their own ways. Hopefully they will know what to do in the future and who they will be spending it with.
Date: 04/29/13 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good idea, nicely executed. A couple of suggestions:
1. Wouldn't it have been more interesting if none of the characters had known what the ring would do?
2. Why not try a transformation that only affects the body? It would lend it that little bit more credibility, and give you the opportunity to indulge in some wry humour. "There's something different about you, dude. I could've sworn you hadn't shaved since this morning." That sort of thing.