Date: 05/23/14 08:05 pm Title: Dazed and Confused
Wow just wow. Looking forward to seeing more updates! !!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, it means a lot. I do want to be more regular with my postings but work and other things keep getting in the way. I'll try to be more frequent with it though :)
Date: 07/31/13 06:17 pm Title: This River is Wild
A few issues with Syntax but nothing a fresh set of eyes wouldn't catch...otherwise excellent craftsmanship from a writer with a fine story to tell.
I'm particularly impressed with the way you handled the "freak out" factor. It was strong and convincing. The phrase "all things must end" was a perfect way to move on from crazy disbelief to a gradual consideration of what comes next.
Impressive. Please finish.
Date: 06/15/13 12:15 am Title: This River is Wild
I can't believe how many times I've re-read this, just waiting for the next chapter. I love how you can practically feel the sexual tension between Erica and Burke, and I'm excited to see where they end up and if they're together.
Author's Response: Thank you, I can't wait to add the next chapter. I've just been really busy lately.