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Reviewer: TheCoolKid Signed Report
Date: 08/06/14 05:49 pm Title: I'm Emma Watson!?

Please continue! Love the concept!

Reviewer: AWESOMEISMYNAME Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/07/14 12:40 pm Title: I'm Emma Watson!?

Im loving it! Keep up the writing and your stories will go far! Love the tg!

Reviewer: sequelmaker Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 07/13/13 09:45 pm Title: I'm Emma Watson!?

this is great concept. keep your progress and skilz!

Reviewer: factualorcc033 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/01/13 09:04 am Title: School Age

ha u cant figure a good endin is that why henrys majic stone is still incomplete
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Reviewer: Connair Signed Report
Date: 04/26/13 04:25 pm Title: I'm Emma Watson!?

I think you've chosen a difficult style of story to write. When you choose someone that readers know, then they come with their own expectations of what that person's life is or should be like - It's why these stories work best on interactive fiction sites where the reader can write an alternative chapter. Pulling the story away from the actress' daily life, and reality makes it easier to achieve but remember what unique attributes of being that actress will help drive the story along. (For example if the actress is Emma Watson, the protagonist might have to deal with a stalker who has the real magical abilities of Harry Potter.)
A good start, just keep the readers happy.

Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed Report
Date: 04/26/13 11:35 am Title: I'm Emma Watson!?

Hey, I'm glad my story sparked this! Keep it up!

Reviewer: Gene Signed starstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 04/25/13 09:12 pm Title: I'm Emma Watson!?

Interested to see which Smurfs actress you have in mind for part 2. Good start....maybe down the road, Mason can become my favorite child actress (though she's not really a child anymore), the uber-talented Abigail Breslin. Solid 7/10 thus far :D

Author's Response: I don't know much about her but I'll try to look into it

Reviewer: touch the light Signed Report
Date: 04/25/13 08:21 pm Title: I'm Emma Watson!?

You write well. What you need to look at is how to create suspense. The revelation that the protagonist has turned into the actress Emma Watson should have been left until the very last moment.

I walked up to the mirror and gasped.
"Emma...?"

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