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Reviewer: agent-billy-bob Signed Report
Date: 05/23/14 06:26 am Title: Chapter 2 sky fall

keep on going

Reviewer: SissyBlondeBimboSlut88 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/18/13 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 1 new changes

please add more

Reviewer: Gene Signed starstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 03/17/13 05:55 am Title: Chapter 1 new changes

Interesting concept...I do have to ask if you meant to say Max can run 3 miles in 20 seconds. Seriously, that's like 540mph. Unless he has a fighter jet strapped to his ass....lol

Look forward to more. 7/10 so far.

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