Reviews For Reach for the Skye
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Reviewer: Carla Signed starstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 03/09/13 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is a good "quick" story. I think you need a second chapter consisting of -start of job, -short time later on the job, - happy ending.

Reviewer: Gene Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/09/13 08:26 am Title: Chapter 1

Not bad. The only complaint I have is the switch in POVs. They're a bit jarring. Good start. I look forward to more soon. 8/10.

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