Date: 06/05/18 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
believer that the universe is orderly and has to follow rules means that have to submit to those rules, believing that there is magic is to believe that you can go against nature. how is accepting that some thing are unchageable and that sometimes you are powerless to do anything about a given situation a sign of aggressiveness. believing in magic is a weakness of the soul for it reveals the childish ego that some people harbour. such trumpian narcissitc urges that make those we call arrogant beleive that they are the center of the universe and that the world will bend to their whims. to believe in magic is to have an immature mind. for where there is hope and not planning disillusionment and tragedy shall follow. a good leader prepares, they do not dream
Date: 03/05/17 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
Magic! would't it be nice if it existed?
But seriously, your story is magic, too. It had me captured and I really enjoyed it. Nice Work.
Date: 07/09/13 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Pretty well-written, but for a story marked Adult there wasn't any sex...
Author's Response: The Adult rating is appropriate for non-explicit themes. Here, the detailed physical and psychological transformation of a boy, leading to the dramatic conflict with his father. There is clearly no room for sex in such a story, And frankly, I'm averse to mixing sex and <18 characters. I don't have a problem with sex scenes, but I don't think they need to be in a story to make it interesting. I think many on this site would agree.
Date: 04/05/13 02:07 am Title: Chapter 5
Great story. Most people don't use a 12- 13 year old as a protagonist. Mabye you should make a sequel.
Author's Response: This was a real challenge. I wanted to keep the character's development realistic by alluding to sexual awakenings without actually exploring them. I haven't done any underage characters before and wanted to avoid any sense of exploitation. So basically I wanted to make Leslie believable without really objectifying her.
Date: 04/03/13 03:49 am Title: Chapter 5
Are you going to make a sequel? I've really liked this story :3
Author's Response: Notwithstanding Godather II or the Empire Strikes Back, sequels seldom are as good as the original. They become merely a recycling of themes that were already present in the original. That makes it boring for the writer to write and even more boring for the reader to read! I don't have immediate plans to take those panties out of the trunk but I cannot say I will never do so. It would have to be a fresh new angle, and I already have three more stories gestating.
Date: 04/02/13 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
this was a nice one. a little short but still a joy to read. i hope you wright more!
Author's Response: This was the right size for a short story. If I go on merely for the sake of erotic detail, I lose momentum. It's important to keep the story moving forward or people (including myself) lose interest. Thanks for commenting!
Date: 03/16/13 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fun story thanks for sharing hun. i hope you continue it.
Princess Panty boy
Author's Response: Thanks, PPb! The story is already finished. I like to post serially, because it spaces out my contributions so something is always out there for people to read while I work on the next story. I prefer that method to making one big post, then going silent for weeks at a time.