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Reviewer: thereader23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 04/14/13 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 1 - the sleeper awakens

Good start! Keep Writing!

Reviewer: I_Think Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/24/13 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 - the sleeper awakens

Awesome! I am impressed by the careful painting of the characters and setting - it flows well! The premise is quite interesting, too. Definitely like it!

Author's Response: Yeah, I like it - it's just I'm not sure where to go from here. Ideally our Heroine would jaunt through time, a series of vignettes, and grow as a character. How does one grow as a character, as a superhero? I dunno. It's going to have to marinate.

Reviewer: DStrout Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/21/13 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1 - the sleeper awakens

Not bad. Being in the future with all these abilities has some potential, especially with time travel. There's also some good possibilities in regards to her "settling in".

Author's Response: She's not going to settle in. She's going to hit the past as soon as possible. (I think.) It's too open-ended. I didn't actually have a story in mind per se. But hey, it's still fun, so here it is.

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