Reviews For Into the Light
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Reviewer: ProjectDawn Signed Report
Date: 01/19/15 12:38 am Title: Chapter 1

wow

Reviewer: Person42 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/23/14 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

I... I think I just read my own dreams put into words. I love this story. Truly. It almost made me cry in happiness for Emily.

Reviewer: Malitron Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/14/13 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

I didn't miss Mark after his quick exit, though the tragedy of his choices would have been more dynamic if he was had more depth. I did miss not getting to know Emily and certainly Jack nearly as well as I would like to have. Forty or fifty thousand more words of clarification of their choices and motivations would have possibly been enough for me to feel I knew these two characters whom I took an immediate liking and wanted to get to know.
Then again, you probably would have had me crying like a bathtub overflowing.... Thank you for the great story.

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/31/13 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice story. I feel this could be an outline of a much bigger story. There is so much that can be told besides just the low points and high points.

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