Date: 12/17/13 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Craig's Wish
I enjoy the story, but I really would like to read more. I noticed that you've worked on other stories since you last updated this one. Is this due to not knowing where to take the story next, or have you abandoned the story? It doesn't seem like it would be a lack of time to write, since you've been working on others. Please continue the story. It was very entertaining.
Author's Response: I just need to work on different things at different times. I am inspired to write different things at different times. So, yeah. That.
Date: 09/04/13 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Craig's Wish
forgive my spelling, I do not speak English.
is a bit, predictable
I think, Craig / Kimberly misused wishes or use stupid, this wasting desires. Craig / Kimberly could use the last wish, to revenge on Hank and his henchmen. and fix your situation, How? wanting a medallion or two rings, with the power to turn a man into a teenage girl sexi,and return them to their original form, (man).
Author's Response: Fair enough, though I have a clear layout in my head of what will happen next, so I'm afraid I won't use your suggestion, though it is a good one. I wish you had told me what language you spoke, as I could have tried to translate it.
Date: 02/07/13 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 4 - A Fulfilled Dream
Wow got pretty intense. This story is different. Although Craig is in a female body the story is still about and from HIS prospective. I'm thinking his day is up and wonder what his new relationship will be when he wakes in Justin's arms.
Date: 01/30/13 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Cheerleading
I'm sorry. I was just thinking as Kimberly. Not the story you wrote. She seems to be getting what she wants and I love a happy ending. You are doing a good job so far and I really don't have a problem. As you said you noted the warning. Keep it going how ever you want and I'll be happy.
Author's Response: No no, it's perfectly fine. I thought you were giving input, and I appreciate input.