Reviews For Andrew and Emily
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Reviewer: Brandi Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/21/14 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really Good. By Chance Can You Fix The ePub

Author's Response: I havent checked the epub but if you can tell me what the issue is I might try fixing it.

Reviewer: Madison Elizabeth Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/10/13 04:31 am Title: Chapter 2

Please add chapter 3

Author's Response: Coming Soon!

Reviewer: touch the light Signed Report
Date: 04/26/13 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 2

You're clearly a competent writer, and you know how to marry images with text, so I'll be blunt.

This story seems to be about how far do you go for a fuck. Nothing wrong with that, but it needs more internal dialogue. I once let a girl paint my nails because I enjoyed the attention as well as the unspoken permission to rest my hand in her lap, but I won't pretend that the episode didn't provoke a hell of a lot of conflicting emotions, not the least of which was a self-deprecating sense of guilt, though I'd done nothing wrong. And the next day, when I walked into my local to watch the football...

You see the possibilities this kind of fiction can throw up?

Author's Response: Thanks. I understand your point of view and will keep it in my mind as the story moves on further. Thanks

Reviewer: Madison Elizabeth Signed Report
Date: 03/26/13 04:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Good start now please add onto it I'd love to here her get him to fully dress

Author's Response: I am working on it......thanks for the response

Reviewer: TCFY Signed Report
Date: 12/14/12 06:15 am Title: Chapter 1

I like it so far :)
Keep going.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot TCFY....will do so!

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