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Reviewer: Lunatastic Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/24/20 12:31 pm Title: Well?

I think I see which way this is going to go, and I'm excited to see if I'm right. But its already pretty engaging 3 chapters in. I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with in the coming chapters. Keep it up!

Reviewer: CHRIS2K Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/24/20 05:40 am Title: A Peck is Fine

Great start .

Reviewer: Dinosaur Signed Report
Date: 11/22/20 10:51 am Title: Sibling Moment

Yup, this is sure to shape up to another story where our intrepid protagonist could have avoided all of the trouble coming their by simply saying "no" to begin with.

I am going to hold up with a rating for a few more chapters, but I will be looking forward to them.

But well done with the first chapter.

Author's Response: You've already got it figured out!

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