Date: 12/12/12 04:30 am Title: The Golden Tickets
Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, much? Good story anyway, but if I heard '5 golden tickets' and a 'visit to a factory' Then I think your co author might be the guy who wrote Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.
Author's Response: Well, it's clearly designed to be a play on Charlie. I started my online writing career with stories about Body Inflation where charlie stories are de rigueur. Mostly it's a cliche I've avoided but thought a TG story could fit into that mould (with some slight elements of body inflation/unbirth fiction)