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Reviewer: Iiie Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/06/17 02:15 pm Title: The Golden Tickets

Fresh and well written. The ending was a bit weird though, and needs some work. Anyway, I've enjoyed it immensely!

Reviewer: Anna Rainstorm Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 04/14/13 09:45 pm Title: The Golden Tickets

A nice twist on the Charlie story. Quite a few typos, but I enjoyed reading it.

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Date: 12/15/12 04:07 pm Title: Alex and the Cell Bank

Nice story, thank you!

Author's Response: You're welcome, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Penny365 Signed starstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 12/12/12 04:30 am Title: The Golden Tickets

Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, much? Good story anyway, but if I heard '5 golden tickets' and a 'visit to a factory' Then I think your co author might be the guy who wrote Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.

Author's Response: Well, it's clearly designed to be a play on Charlie. I started my online writing career with stories about Body Inflation where charlie stories are de rigueur. Mostly it's a cliche I've avoided but thought a TG story could fit into that mould (with some slight elements of body inflation/unbirth fiction)

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