Date: 03/05/15 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the idea of the story. I hope to see interesting character interactions in the future. My biggest gripe us the development of Alec as a one dimensional character. He was jerk, and presented as one at the start, but I also understand the need for an antagonist. The biggest question I have now is where do you go from that point.
Date: 10/26/14 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
It appears that this fic is dead and therefore will not be updated, but I just wanted to let you know that this fic was fantastic. I was intrigued by the plot and the characters, and personally, I wouldn't mind having a power like that myself, hehehe. I don't think you elaborated enough on who the characters were, but still, the creativity and ingenuity in this premise is still THERE. So, kudos on a great TG story.
Date: 02/13/14 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wonder how this is going to end, David can't feminize all the male world!
Author's Response: I'm actually starting rewriting it from the beginning (with new pictures and better flowing scenes) You can find it here: http://thextra89.blogspot.com/
Date: 08/04/13 02:44 am Title: Chapter 8
if you can not understand, what I write, it is because I speak Spanish. A thousand pardons.
I liked Alec's personality,emerged for Alex, but would like to return Alex,
If David leaves, Alex alone with Rachel and another girl, And when David returns
discovers a Alex
I do not like you to put that Alec / Alex got tired on the trip. in your Alec / Alex drawing notice that Alec / Alex is an athletic girl with great force and energy.
Alec / Alex breaks a vase on David's head to knock him unconscious, but immediately dropped tears in his eyes.
Alec / Alex tried to kill David to get the crystal? but you can not?
the personality of Alec and Alex will be merged?
why do not you draw a picture of a character that already appeared (David, Sam, Riley / Rachel, Alec / Alex, Simon / Leah, Cassidy, Sophia, Ellie, Aubree) in a different pose or using a different outfit
Date: 04/24/13 02:21 am Title: Chapter 7
Suggestions by "john Smith 13" for Chapter 8 by “Midas Touch by theXtra89”:
Before Alec was transformed into Alex, he thought, why the mind of Sophia was not altered? and deduced that it was possibly because men thought about the kind of girl you want to bride, but Sophia thought about the kind of girl you want to be, so just change its body, but retained its mind. and to be condemned to become a girl, choose visualized as a girl (stronger than a man, dominating, crafty, intelligent and with his attraction to girls (lesbian).), all in order to save his mind intact. but the blow of David, caused him to lose his concentration, so it turned into a combination of his ideal girlfriend and the girl I visualize.
Alex: is now an exhibitionist, seductive, stronger than an average man, shrewd, lesbian, but when sees David is attracted to David, but when not sees David begins to feel hatred towards David for turning him into a girl. The personality of Alec still inside Alex and is struggling to get out, when not looking at David.
They can also happen funny scenes where Alex pretends stumble to touch Rachel in their breasts or elsewhere pretending it was an accident or prune your hand under the seat when Rachel is going to sit.
Alec / Alex hatched a plan when in the cave?
David will realize the great strength of Alex on the way?
Decide whether to consider these suggestions or not. the last word is yours
I like your drawings
Date: 03/06/13 11:38 am Title: Chapter 6
Wonder where this is going to end - David is now the "chieftain" of a "tribe" of girls following his every step... He will soon have to house, feed and clothe them, people will start wondering where those boys and men, and one old woman, have gone. And soon there will be an inevitable "cat fight" for him!
Date: 02/06/13 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is among the best stories I have read here at TG S. May it keep on, I see at least two chapters in the offing, one is bound to come when the oldies present themselves for the wardens as new women, revealing the power of rejuvenation he has. Next is when public authorities get themselves involved - this power must be controlled, least criminals and secret agents come to use it as a way of getting out of trouble. And I see him later on in a comfortable life style as dealer of youth... Big businessman! Together with - which of the girls???
Date: 12/11/12 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
Really cool idea, and handled well.
Though I think the fact that his brother is the subject in chapter one makes the changes a little creepy - maybe he could have been freaked out just as much if it was a close friend, but without the incest angle?