Alright, I'm hooked and excited for what happens as more changes come about! Looking forward to reading more of your work!
This is a lot of fun. Nice classic style that's too rare these days. Excited to see where it goes
I'm the biggest fan of the show burn. One of my favorite stories was a one thing at a time transition. Keep it up the excitement is there and loving that he's an ass. Can't wait to see wear this goes.
Really enjoying this so far. My only critique would be that I think these chapters are too short. Just as they’re getting really good, they end. I want more!
Great start. I'm excited to see where it goes