Date: 11/24/20 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 8 - The Interrogation
Loving it, keep it coming! Really curious how the talk with Kathy will go. Will the fact that Erin's now gainfully employed count for anything?
Author's Response: I wonder what Kathy's been up to... Thanks for the comment!
Date: 11/16/20 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Acceptance
Oh hm the black vans are very very suspicious, I guess to reply to the reply to my previous review, I guess the government really must be the one behind the fire in the laboratory. Now I just wonder if the doctor survived.
I enjoyed the chapter! It was fun to see Erin and Sierra hanging out and Erin being a really nice and accepting person. I was shocked to see Erin actually come out to everyone who knew her as Aaron, but I'm glad that at least she's accepted the new life. I'm just really really curious how Kathy reacted to the instagram post.
Excited to read the next one, especially on how the date between Sierra and Darcy would go! I'm guessing maybe Kathy will appear again on the next chapter? Or maybe Emily will finally make an appearance?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Hopefully the next chapter doesn't disappoint!
Date: 11/13/20 09:51 am Title: Chapter 5 - Depression
Grateful for the wonderful update. Okay, I didn't expect it to be a fire, I for sure thought that the doctor was taken by the government because he said something to Erin, and because he planned to make a cure. I guess accidents may happen sometimes.
Mike is really a huge asshole, I hope it gets settled and he gets replaced so that Erin can get his job back, since I really love seeing Ben and Darcy being friends with him.
Waiting for the next update soon! Hopefully, we finally get to see Emily since it seems like Erin needs someone who knows her as Aaron to talk to right now.
Author's Response: Who's not to say the government didn't start the fire?
Date: 11/10/20 10:55 am Title: Chapter 4 - Bargaining
Ooh interesting chapter. I hope the relationship he has with Kathy is okay, I guess it would be pretty hard for her.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Seeing as how she completely became Erin now after the release, and with the chapter titles, I'm guessing the next chapter will be pretty [depressing] for her.
I have a little prediction that maybe when Erin hangs out with Ben, Kathy sees them and misunderstands, confronts them, which leads to Erin crying.
I'm excited to see the new character, Emily. Hopefully she can be a sister that Erin can lean on for support and help her get through and [accept] the change.
Author's Response: Nice! First person to guess the next 2 chapter titles! I have more chapters after I run out of predictable chapter titles, so there's more story to tell. We'll see Kathy again.
Date: 11/09/20 04:37 am Title: Chapter 4 - Bargaining
Awesome chapter and storyline! I can’t understand why the doctor disappeared, and he didn’t even get the rest of the money! The poor girl at least she’s got her sister
Author's Response: I know what happened to the doctor. But I don't to spoil it quite yet.
Date: 11/07/20 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Drug Trial
Hi!!! Very interesting story! I really love it so far. As usual, the pacing and narration is really good and the characters are very likeable. I'm left wondering what will happen after. Can't wait to read the rest!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm looking forward to exploring these characters some more. I'm shooting to have the next chapter out tonight!