Date: 10/13/20 12:45 pm Title: Beware cats bareing gifts. (Andrew POV)
Really looking forward to chapter 3. Love to see what the body paint does for "her"!
Author's Response: So do I, I only decided at the end that the next chapter was going to be body paint. One day my style of write what comes into your head is going to get me in trouble. 😊x
Date: 10/13/20 01:08 am Title: Beware cats bareing gifts. (Jess's POV)
great story so far. I hope to see where this goes.
I did found a few possible typos.
"two girls inf ront " "them he started"
this phrase might be better as
"stand prohibitively " becomes "stand provocatively"
Author's Response: Thanks for that, I'm not sure how word missed that one. I'll go in and fix it just now. I'm glad your enjoying it. Hopefully I'll have chapter 3 up soon. :)