Reviews For Cosplay III
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Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/21/20 03:59 pm Title: Beware cats bareing gifts. (Jess's POV)

Mmm, sounds like fun. Maybe the saying should be, "you get easy being green" ?

Author's Response: You may find me stealing that for a chapter tittle lol :) x

Reviewer: AlexiaRose Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/13/20 07:36 pm Title: Beware cats bareing gifts. (Jess's POV)

so wanna work for jess

Author's Response: Itís nice to see youíre still enjoying my stuff. X

Reviewer: AlexiaRose Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/13/20 07:31 pm Title: Beware cats bareing gifts. (Andrew POV)

me want this so bad, to be a sexy girl at the con.

Reviewer: c_black Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/13/20 12:45 pm Title: Beware cats bareing gifts. (Andrew POV)

Really looking forward to chapter 3. Love to see what the body paint does for "her"!

Author's Response: So do I, I only decided at the end that the next chapter was going to be body paint. One day my style of write what comes into your head is going to get me in trouble. 😊x

Reviewer: okieohio Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/13/20 01:08 am Title: Beware cats bareing gifts. (Jess's POV)

great story so far. I hope to see where this goes.
I did found a few possible typos.
"two girls inf ront " "them he started"

this phrase might be better as
"stand prohibitively " becomes "stand provocatively"

Author's Response: Thanks for that, I'm not sure how word missed that one. I'll go in and fix it just now. I'm glad your enjoying it. Hopefully I'll have chapter 3 up soon. :)

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