Reviews For A Shared Soul
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Reviewer: Shauna1892 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/02/20 04:48 pm Title: Dream Girl

Very good story! It honestly made me go into tears just by seeing his (or her) dad caring for his now daughter.

Before I cry more out of joy, may I ask, will you work on more chapters? :O

Author's Response: Yes! This story is far from over! I'm just not the fastest writer!

Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/24/20 03:51 pm Title: Dream Girl

It is beautiful as far as I can tell, and I just can not wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Faye Kistry Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/23/20 07:04 pm Title: Dream Girl

Wonderful heart warming stuff. Thank you.

Reviewer: Alec123445 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/23/20 01:58 am Title: Quinton

Did you get inspiration from Beyond Two Souls because I really liked that concept there and I do here as well.
Keep Writing!

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I've not heard of that!

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/22/20 11:28 pm Title: Quinton

Nice little story so far.
Noticed a few errors in words, but not bad.

Author's Response: Could I bother you to list a few? After multiple readings searching for errors, I feel silly having still missed a few.

Reviewer: Soumahr Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/22/20 06:30 pm Title: Dream Girl

Liked the story. 😁

Reviewer: artistlibre Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/22/20 06:24 pm Title: Dream Girl

Thoroughly enjoyed! Nice premise. I was looking for the more cosmic intervention part in the second chapter, including the dream girl. Looking forward for what happens next!

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