Reviews For Emergency Measures
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Reviewer: Cryofly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/14/20 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well that was a harsh transformation with all the crazy robotics, but well written. These kinds of cryosleep gone wrong stories are always fun, and this one was a good one. Thanks for sharing!

As a point of advice. It would make it easier to read if you skipped a line between separate paragraphs and dialogue. It helps it not seem like a wall of text.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words and the advice - I'll try to format the next story better.

Reviewer: Day Dreamer Signed Report
Date: 08/29/20 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fun read, well-written, upbeat (since Christine doesn't seem to mind too much). It seemed like Custodia acted a bit hastily, but I bet an hour-plus is forever to an AI tasked with making the best possible corrections to a bad situation.

Reviewer: Princevoodoo Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/26/20 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

The story was well written and easy to read. It was very enjoyable.

Thanks for sharing!

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