Date: 09/14/20 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well that was a harsh transformation with all the crazy robotics, but well written. These kinds of cryosleep gone wrong stories are always fun, and this one was a good one. Thanks for sharing!
As a point of advice. It would make it easier to read if you skipped a line between separate paragraphs and dialogue. It helps it not seem like a wall of text.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words and the advice - I'll try to format the next story better.
Date: 08/29/20 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fun read, well-written, upbeat (since Christine doesn't seem to mind too much). It seemed like Custodia acted a bit hastily, but I bet an hour-plus is forever to an AI tasked with making the best possible corrections to a bad situation.