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Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 09/10/20 03:37 pm Title: The Women

This was an intriguing story but I would still like an epilogue of what happened to the men turned women after the 3 got their revenge

Author's Response: Iíve been pondering on that. I havenít reached any firm decisions on what should happen that would best and most interestingly further the story. So, I havenít written anything yet. Still working toward an inspired continuation. The issue is that I want the next pieces to still be grounded in a plausible reality, very much ďwhat would really happen if this stuck? How would the characters react? How would the world realistically react?Ē After all, their identities are changed. My boss would never believe me coming to work a completely different person, etc. The ripple effects are endless with severe repercussions. Unlike real transgender situations where you could notify others of your impending changes, this is sudden and unexpected. For me, there is a lot to unpack here.

Reviewer: Johns Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/23/20 02:59 pm Title: TITLE PAGE

Great story! You are a very interesting writer!
Are you planning to write a sequel? It would be interesting if due to an unexpected event they remain stuck in their new forms even after 24h. There could also be room for "character redemption", with a few more chapters...
Thanks for your story!

Author's Response: Johns, you are so very kind. Iím so glad you enjoyed the story and I cannot express how much I appreciate your compliment. I had not planned on a sequel but I see your points about possible places to take the story. If Iím inspired to write a continuation, Iím thankful for your ideas. We will see what I write next. Maybe you would like some of my other stories in the meantime? Thank you, again!

Reviewer: VLemur Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/22/20 05:12 pm Title: The Women

Utterly hot and fantastic. You have a gift for writing TF scenes. Please write more.

Author's Response: Thank you, VLemur! Thatís probably the greatest compliment Iíve ever received. Means a lot to me!

Reviewer: Titaniauberon Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/18/20 05:57 pm Title: Thatcher

Great Start!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the rest, Titaniauberon.

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