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Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/27/20 04:09 pm Title: Not Anti Depressants

Fun!

Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/27/20 04:09 pm Title: Not Anti Depressants

Fun!

Reviewer: jk67 Signed Report
Date: 08/19/20 08:54 pm Title: Not Anti Depressants

Great start to something that would make a great longer story! I like that it starts with the girlfriend changing first. Ind love it for you to continue this.

Reviewer: Titaniauberon Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/20 01:34 am Title: Not Anti Depressants

Hopefully the newly female Adam will be less wishy washy 😂

Reviewer: bloodraven Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/17/20 09:48 pm Title: Not Anti Depressants

Good start, nice tease at the end of the first chapter.

The first chapter of many yeah?

Reviewer: Daniella Taylor Signed Report
Date: 08/17/20 08:19 pm Title: Not Anti Depressants

Definitely needs more!!

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/17/20 05:51 pm Title: Not Anti Depressants

Oh, no. You don't get off that easy. You can't just dangle a start like that and walk away. We need to know if the switches are permanent, and how each one of them feels about sex from the other side. If they decide to stay the opposite sex for a while, or if it's permanent, then we need to know what the total experience is like, in great detail. There has to be at least one period involved, maybe even a pregnancy.
Heck, you need a couple of chapters just to cover lingerie shopping.
I'd say you have another 25-50 chapters before you can think about stopping LOL
Seriously, great idea for a change, I think it would make a great longer story. Thank you.

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/17/20 05:34 pm Title: Not Anti Depressants

I suspect they have the opposite effect on the opposite sex. Let's see. We need a part two ASAP.

Reviewer: CD_boy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/17/20 05:09 pm Title: Not Anti Depressants

Please please please

Reviewer: NurseTingle Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/17/20 03:32 pm Title: Not Anti Depressants

Oh man, such a spicy build up. Really hope you write more, I want to hear about Adam getting some of Emma's dick. I like how Adam wants to preserve the relationship while Emma wants to get laid. Her making him watch her jerk off was totally a turn on and just what a guy would do.

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