Date: 08/17/20 05:51 pm Title: Not Anti Depressants
Oh, no. You don't get off that easy. You can't just dangle a start like that and walk away. We need to know if the switches are permanent, and how each one of them feels about sex from the other side. If they decide to stay the opposite sex for a while, or if it's permanent, then we need to know what the total experience is like, in great detail. There has to be at least one period involved, maybe even a pregnancy.
Heck, you need a couple of chapters just to cover lingerie shopping.
I'd say you have another 25-50 chapters before you can think about stopping LOL
Seriously, great idea for a change, I think it would make a great longer story. Thank you.
Date: 08/17/20 03:32 pm Title: Not Anti Depressants
Oh man, such a spicy build up. Really hope you write more, I want to hear about Adam getting some of Emma's dick. I like how Adam wants to preserve the relationship while Emma wants to get laid. Her making him watch her jerk off was totally a turn on and just what a guy would do.