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Reviewer: H20_Mel0n Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/16/20 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Looks promising and it makes me happy seeing age regression novels ^____^

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/21/20 12:08 am Title: Chapter 1

A good start, but a lot of unanswered questions have arisen. Did the girl exist before his suicide? What was her surgery for? Hot old is she? Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: bloodraven Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/17/20 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good start! Interesting premise.

Could use a bit of a touch with editing, like repeating 'prestigious' in the first paragraph. Line breaks too but I understand the uploader can be difficult. Not that I've uploaded a story of my own...

Looking forward for more!

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