Reviews For Floria
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Reviewer: Griffin Signed Report
Date: 08/14/20 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hi-
It’s a very nice tale so far,
in spite of the dark shadows looming...

It is also gives more meaning when you include the little Mother kitty,
regardless of the outcome.

I noticed that you said that you posted Chapter 5 but that’s not showing-
I just thought that I’d let you know.

Thank You for Posting!
-g

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know.

Reviewer: FaithRomeyer Signed Report
Date: 08/11/20 02:30 am Title: Chapter 3

The narrative in conversations could use some more specifications on who's saying what, who's telling who. That's my opinion.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comment.

Reviewer: Casey Thompson Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/09/20 07:22 am Title: Chapter 1

Excellent beginning, Portia. Looking forward to the rest.

Reviewer: Andrea DiMaggio Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/08/20 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

As fanciful and creative as an operatic take might definitely be, it also includes the tragedy so many operas include. How utterly sad but brilliant a story.Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you, 'Drea.

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