Reviews For Prettyboy
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Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/05/20 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: shooter130 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/04/20 06:50 am Title: Chapter 1

I really wish this wasn't a 1 part story

Author's Response: Honestly, I agree with you, and I've been thinking the same thing. I like these characters a lot and I want to know what happens to them next. I don't know how to do it justice though. Prettyboy was constructed from the ground up around one character arc and that arc ends when Lucas falls in love with being pretty. To directly continue the story from that point you would need to give Lucas some kind of new character arc, and at that point I can't help but feel you might as well write an entirely new story. I did really enjoy writing in this silly near future cute-boys-doing-cute-things setting though, and I'd like to return to it someday. If I do, I'll be really tempted to put in a Lucas and Steph cameo. It'd be horribly self-indulgent, but that's never stopped me before!

Reviewer: BalletBoyJamie Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/04/20 03:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Really, really good. First one like this I've seen in ages, thank you so much for posting. I, for one, would love to see more of this world.

Reviewer: Bri74 Signed Report
Date: 08/03/20 08:17 am Title: Chapter 1


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