Reviews For Brothers New Life
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Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/05/20 02:29 am Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

I knew I smelled a sequel!
Keep it up, I like it so for.
What's with the cigarettes and the ring anyway?

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it Amanda :) There isn't meant to be a direct link between the ring and cigarettes though I can see what you mean haha

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/30/20 08:12 am Title: Chapter 2: Siblings Shopping

Seems like the ring tends to make the wearer more 'outgoing' than the guy they were before.
Great chapter, I guess having a brother turn into a sexy woman would take some getting used to.
I'm also glad the sales lady took care of all of Danielle's needs. Discrete and professional.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.

Reviewer: Nyssa Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/28/20 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

This is a fun, if occasionally dark, little universe you've created here. I'd quibble a bit with the lack of issue with id, but it's a fantasy, so...

I do enjoy it. Thanks!

Author's Response: Hi Nyssa, I would just like to clarify what exactly you mean by lack of id? My messages are always open I do appreciate feedback so that I can make adjustments and improve my writing accordingly and I am glad you enjoy it though. Thank you :) Bex

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/28/20 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Great start!
I was afraid Mark would find the ring and use it on himself, which would be kind of wasted compared to Daniel using it.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hi Elron, I am almost tempted to scrap the third story as it almost immediately got a 1 star review without any kind of explanation and this kind of knocked my confidence to continue. Thank you for your continued support. Bex :)

Reviewer: Elron Signed Report
Date: 07/28/20 11:49 am Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Bex, I haven't even started reading and I am so excited to see your latest story posted. Cheers!

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