Date: 07/30/20 11:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoyed this, gotta agree that I am not a big fan of sudden identity death, but rather a slow change to the person themselves is cool. In terms of the game I think it would be fun if this ‘game’ played so that based on his skill/perks certain choices or actions were unavailable or he had a quick timer to do something before he was forced into something. Anyway love your work and hope you continue your open stories
Date: 07/27/20 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start! You have to continue. I just hope Billy doesn't lose too much of himself to Bambi. Not a fan of identity death. I think it's better that he knows who he is inside, but is powerless to behave as anyone but Bimbo Bambi.
Love your writing and creativity.