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Reviewer: H20_Mel0n Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/22/20 08:09 pm Title: 2 friends arguing

Interesting start but the pacing is hella fast. :0 Looking forward for more!

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/30/20 08:49 am Title: 2 friends arguing

I'm surprised it took him so long to figure out he had boobs. I think I would have noticed right away. And then the hell with everything else.
Great start, can't wait to see where this leads.

Reviewer: KFC Signed Report
Date: 07/29/20 02:40 am Title: 2 friends arguing

need proofread

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