Reviews For Fairy Certain
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Reviewer: Arcade Signed Report
Date: 07/25/20 07:26 am Title: Chapter 1. The beginning

Enjoyed this first chapter! My one point of constructive criticism would be to maybe pace yourself with these chapters. Give them some breathing room, no need to rush. Other than that, this was a solid first chapter, and I’m excited to read more! Really hope you continue.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/23/20 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1. The beginning

Good start, although the pacing seemed a little too fast. Maybe take more time to describe the scene and the characters. Help us to see what you see. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: keepera Signed Report
Date: 07/23/20 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1. The beginning

Well.... I would have preferred a penile inversion with dual eruptions/enlargements at another location on my body.
But, whatever turns you on. A fun story. Hoping for more.

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