Date: 07/22/20 02:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting story. Very creative method of change.
I honestly thought the black water backing up from the bathroom drain was somehow related to the ReGend, and that a mysterious creature (or even James) was going to rise up out of the black water. I also thought that maybe John was going to wind up only 1/2 changed because the changes were taking so long compared to what he was expecting. So good job keeping up the suspense!
I was surprised that James to Gina from behind for their first time together. I'd have wanted to see her reaction to it all, and of course be able to play with the boobs. Same with her, I'd think she would have wanted to face her lover. He could have carried her into the bedroom and laid on top of her on the bed. But that's just me.
I'm gonna take a guess and say they had more than a brief fling, if they met up later at the coffee shop. I do like happy endings, after all.
So thank you for putting together a complete story. It had detail, it had suspense, and it had conflict. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading my story and for the sterling review! I tried to be unpredictable so I am glad that worked :) Given your suggestions I think you might like some of the stories I have in the making - they are much weirder and campier.
Date: 07/22/20 02:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Honey, if 'John' is any indication of how you feel, there's nothing "possible" about you being transgender--you ARE transgender.
Author's Response: John isnít a self insert so much as a means to deliver the fantasy and an opportunity to (perhaps a tad clumsily) discuss something of the themes in play. Thank you for reading my story :)