Date: 09/20/20 07:28 pm Title: Nothing to Worry About
Yup, yup, yup! I knew Ryan was next and was pretty sure he had changed and would accept her, but I think those two have a relationship coming soon. This is a very good story, loving it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love seeing your predictions as you read through. Next chapter is Thursday!
Date: 09/07/20 06:56 pm Title: I Thought You Were a Girl
Smoothly runs! You have that certain touch, moving the plot interestingly without any artificial conflicts or extra characters. What you do here is efficient and handful, and applicable to all the audience, even the kids, especially those who want to come out to their parents. Very rarely matured stories come by, like yours. Thank you for writing it!
Author's Response: Wow! This is seriously so nice. Sometimes it's hard for me to believe that people actually like my writing, especially this much, so thank you for being incredibly kind with your words! I hope to keep you interested!
Date: 08/20/20 05:12 pm Title: Get a Grip
This brings back too many too real memories. I really feel for Dani. The last thing my dad said to me is "I'll always be there for you, remember that." - but what he really meant was "I'll choose to never see you again. Goodbye." This was almost worse. Five stars for the feels, but man, this is a sad moment.
Date: 07/26/20 10:48 pm Title: I Thought You Were a Girl
The story seems interesting so far and I look forward to the new chapters!
I noticed a problem at the lines where you describe their heights, the feet and inches symbols show up as codes rather than characters.
Keep up the good work,
Author's Response: Oh, oops! Not a fan of this website's text submission -_-; Hopefully it's good now, and I'll make sure to look for that in the future. Thanks for the review! And I'm glad you like it so far!