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Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/29/16 09:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Would love to see the transition continue.

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/12/14 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story but you left it in a cliffhanger.continue please.

Reviewer: dragonforceguy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/06/14 07:41 am Title: Chapter 1

please continue it just stoped when i began to think what happens now the end is ot fair

Reviewer: Baby_Girl_69ing Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/15/13 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1


Great story please continue.

Baby girl

Reviewer: Kara Alexia Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 04/24/13 05:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Need this continued, I think. Good story. :)

Reviewer: Brenda S Signed Report
Date: 01/20/13 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like all your stories. Your writing is getting so much better. Thanks for the fun read

Reviewer: JillMicayla Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/28/12 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1

The sister did well at ensuring her twin would be looking like a girl. Slowly but surely she got him to the point he didn't know what he wanted.
I enjoy these type of stories, where the boy is unsuspecting that he is moving from being a boy to being a girl.

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 11/25/12 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think a continuation of this story would be very nice. I would love to see the new daughter embrace the change and wilfully accept the inevitable.

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