Date: 08/13/20 03:24 pm Title: ROUND 2 Part One
Sorry, not my cup of tea, this story has a deep sense of NTR/cuckoldery. It’s extremely messy and you can just pity Arthur, no matter what compulsions there may be. Dropping this one, please make a warning that this story is going to be pretty dark.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't like the story. I think some people like cuckoldish stuff (this isn't cuckolding in my view as much as a perversion of previously monogamous relationships due to a game) and, either way, what's happened so far makes sense to me in how this would work if a game like this entered people's lives. Changing power-dynamics and sexuality and appearances would naturally make it difficult for people to be considerate of each other's feelings and it would likewise make people more sensitive to their partners' issues. Tying it in a neat wholesome bow seems contrived, to me. Especially in the first couple rounds of a supernatural boardgame.
Date: 08/02/20 02:37 am Title: Chapter 1
This is one of my favorite stories I've read here. I've been checking every day to see if the next chapter is out yet.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! And sorry for the long wait, this next one has been getting away from me a little lol.
Date: 07/06/20 06:55 pm Title: Bathroom Break
Nice story so far, gotta admit that these type of gameboard stories are my favorite and it's going good as of these 3 chapters.
I'll look forward to the next rounds.
(Just made an account to write you this review, keep up the good work)
Date: 07/02/20 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love a good feedback loop and I can see the possiblility of one forming here.
Let's say you have a character who says whatever they're thinking AND this character becomes uncontrollably aroused, such as you do.
What happens if another character (or their body) becomes obedient to the words he can't help but say? What happens then?
Anywho, looking forward to ROUND 2 !
Author's Response: Yeah, definitely trying to think of how to best take advantage of that dynamic forming. Thanks for the feedback!