Date: 07/06/20 06:55 pm Title: Bathroom Break
Nice story so far, gotta admit that these type of gameboard stories are my favorite and it's going good as of these 3 chapters.
I'll look forward to the next rounds.
(Just made an account to write you this review, keep up the good work)
Date: 07/02/20 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love a good feedback loop and I can see the possiblility of one forming here.
Let's say you have a character who says whatever they're thinking AND this character becomes uncontrollably aroused, such as you do.
What happens if another character (or their body) becomes obedient to the words he can't help but say? What happens then?
Anywho, looking forward to ROUND 2 !
Author's Response: Yeah, definitely trying to think of how to best take advantage of that dynamic forming. Thanks for the feedback!