Date: 10/16/20 04:44 pm Title: Not Romantic
Yay Kitty! Yay Clark! Yay good triumphs over evil! Yay most of all to Chloe for another fun, sweet and sexy adventure, nice to see you stretch a bit further into the dark side along the way.
Yay'all yay'all better be voting!
Date: 10/15/20 09:14 pm Title: Dark Secret
Ok, stupid question Chloe:
"But Andrew can also pull of a pair of women's jeans"
Is it 'pull off' or 'pull on'? Either one works, but 'pull of' does not.
This is starting to keep me up at night.
Author's Response: Yikes! That's a typo!!! thanks
Date: 10/15/20 02:05 pm Title: Romantic Getaway
Oh my, has Christie been had? Hope it's by one (or a group) of the Men she "outed". She's so nasty that she could easily implode without any outside help. Also very nice of her to give away all her passwords where Kitty can find them and destroy all of Christie's leverage against her!
Date: 10/12/20 04:11 pm Title: Captor's Rage
I can't describe how satisfying it will be when Christie finally gets her comeuppance.
And I'm not sure if this is weird, but I just really like reading your stories for all the happy moments that the main character has. And that easily trumps the sexy moments. It's just nice when the characters are having a good time.
Date: 10/10/20 03:37 pm Title: More Than Sex
I think Christine has trouble coming! If what I’m guessing is going to happen, she going to tell him all, Christine won’t have any hold on her and will have no job. Very nice twist the owners son falling for Kitty
Author's Response: Falling hard!
Date: 09/25/20 04:54 pm Title: Bait
I see you are going to have Christie kick her out! I’m hoping that Kitty still can trick Christie into paying for the operation! As always a wonderful storyline
Author's Response: Always a happy ending... just one you won't necessarily see coming.
Date: 09/21/20 05:48 am Title: Dark Secret
I’ve been meaning to write a review for this story for quite some time, as I’ve enjoyed it from the start. It has depths and insights that go beyond some of your other tales which mark it out as special.
Here’s hoping that the tables are fully turned. Great writing, Chloe.
Date: 08/27/20 04:39 pm Title: Dark Secret
Really enjoying the story and I hope you keep it up. I think, however, the caricatures of religious and conservative people which pop up from time to time in your stories are a bit biased, and always biased against them. There are hypocritical people in all human activities, religious and otherwise (just take a look at many politicians, liberal and conservative), but you paint all conservative and religious people with too broad a brush.
The deeply religious people I know would, no doubt, be very uncomfortable with what Kitty is becoming. Their response would not be, however, to take advantage of her or watch with satisfaction as she is humiliated. They would pray for her and ask God to help her. They would hate what they see as sin, but love the sinner.
Just like the Book says.
Author's Response: I really don't think I paint everyone with that brush but, I'm sorry to say, this story's villain is, indeed, a religious bigot. You will see that others in her church see things differently but that's a minor point because I wanted to create a clear antagonist. I don't mean to offend but you mind find the story offensive.
Date: 08/27/20 02:52 pm Title: It Was
I love how you've portrayed every member of this super conservative church as a bunch of closeted deviants.
It's always the ones who protest something the strongest that are usually into that exact thing.
Author's Response: I wanted to come up with a motive for our antagonist and, well, there you go.
Date: 08/26/20 02:29 am Title: Yes, Taller
The writing is good as always but it's hard to comment Since neither of them are that likable and it's not erotic (yet I hope?). They are also both pretty opaque in terms of feelings; Kitty seems to be clueless about her emotional needs and Christie is hiding her motivations not just from Kitty but us and possibly herself?
Author's Response: Interestingly, that's exactly what I'm hoping for. It'll get there...
Date: 08/24/20 03:01 pm Title: Dark Secret
Glad you're back! And I'm sorry to see you lost motivation to post more, although I can understand how very little feedback could impact your drive.
I think I've read all of your stories, but I'm sure I've only commented on a few. I'll make sure to start giving more regular feedback!
Date: 08/23/20 03:33 pm Title: Giggles
Excellent chapter as always! I love your style, I been following you a long time now! Pay no attention to the negative feedback, you will always be one of my favorite authors!
Author's Response: Oh, negative is fine. It's the lack of anything that's a bummer. Thanks again!
Date: 08/22/20 08:54 pm Title: Here...
Sorry to hear about the feedback. I've personally liked your style. Youre one of my top 3 favorite author here. What kind of feedback is best to give? I don't usually like being critical of authors' styles as it's not the viewers place to critiquethe artist.
My feedback? I love your style and your stories. I keep reading them and they help me through. Hope you keep putting yourself out there. Youre material is fun and easy to read
Author's Response: Thanks. I was being whiney because thousands of people read a story but when only two or three bother to say anything, it's disappointing. I really like hearing what people think.