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Reviewer: Olive Branch Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/03/20 02:28 am Title: Chapter 5: First and Fourth Dates

I feel I’ve been had... is this a reference to that one tumblr post a while ago?

I’m too excited to see how their relationship would be to be mad, but know I would be mad if you weren’t such a good author!

Author's Response: I didn't set up the story that way but once I knew they'd be having dinner together i knew I had to include it :p

Reviewer: Skadia Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/02/20 05:16 am Title: Chapter 1: The Duel

Love your stories in general, can't wait to see where this is all going :D

Reviewer: Day Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/02/20 02:39 am Title: Chapter 6: Battle Of The Herbos

Well written, entertaining, not too hard to follow along. A quirky premise too, I like it, along with the sidebar romance between Millie and Kat. Thanks for posting.

Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/01/20 04:46 am Title: Chapter 6: Battle Of The Herbos

Awwwwwwwww, finally!

Reviewer: Penned Signed Report
Date: 06/28/20 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Duel

Ok, this is funny, and I'm enjoying it.

Reviewer: Allendia Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/28/20 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 4: Butterfly Hisses

This story is so wonderfully disasterfully gay its amazing. I adore it. Goossshh. XD

Reviewer: Maria Esperanza Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/25/20 12:50 am Title: Chapter 1: The Duel

2 perfect pairs!

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/24/20 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 2: Meeting Girls

Great chapter. I can picture the two hotheads letting their foolish pride get the best of them. Please keep the chapters coming.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/24/20 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Duel

Great start! Can't wait to see where you go with this story.

Reviewer: Fishguy123 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/24/20 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Duel

Cute and well written :)

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