Date: 07/23/20 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hi Tiny, this is my second or third time reading DB. Janet sounds like an absolute knockout, probably centerfold quality. Your descriptions are really detailed and frankly mouth-watering. Did you base her off of an actual person when you created her, or does she exist only in your mind? Maybe Tyra Banks? I think if I had to be stuck in a woman's body hers wouldn't be too bad a trade. Same question about Charlotte. I wish I could see them both.
As for the chapters, I know this chapter 10 does not line up with FM chapter 10. Is it just a matter of file chopping, or has the material changed as well? One of my favorite stories, because it is so detailed in plot and description and because it is so erotic. Thanks, Elron.
Author's Response: I'm editing each chapter and re-writing as needed to improve flow and make what's going on clear to the reader. I read these years later and I regret some of the choices I made when I first posted it.
Date: 07/13/20 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm pretty sure I read this on another board a few years ago. Are you reposting this? If so has anything been changed?
Author's Response: This is a story that I've posted at several other sites over the years. I finally finished the last few chapters and will post the complete story as I finish editing them.
Date: 06/27/20 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely like this story - it`s story telling reminds me of your Turned Tables story, with Marlene. It has a nice pace and the erotic moments inspire the imagination. Thanks for this! Once I have finished an actual chapter, I can`t wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!