Reviews For Black Raven
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Reviewer: Allendia Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/21/20 04:31 am Title: Chapter 2, Shadow Blood

I am really interested in this story, and owh, and poor Evalyn. D: She needs hugs and cuddles and headpats clearly. Poor little Eva just hatched and is in a strange new situation. D:

Author's Response: Thanks for your interest! I honestly wasn't sure how well people would think of my writing and it makes me feel good that at least some people like it. And yes, Evalyn defiantly needs some hugs. It just might take a bit...

Reviewer: flowerboy Signed Report
Date: 06/20/20 06:29 am Title: Little Black Raven

this is awesome!!!!! I'd suggest doing double spaces between lines to improve readability but I love where this is going. excited to see more!

Reviewer: Wispy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/19/20 02:24 am Title: Little Black Raven

Enjoyed this intro, excited to read more.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/19/20 12:57 am Title: Little Black Raven

Looks interesting! I'd love to see more!

Reviewer: Allendia Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/18/20 11:51 pm Title: Little Black Raven

Hmm, a very interesting intro chapter, you have my interest piqued. =)

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