Reviews For Strange restaurant
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Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/18/20 03:10 am Title: Chapter 1

"The beauty there is the same as rumors. The breasts are very large."

Seems reasonable. I would definitely attend a restaurant where the beauty was as rumors and the breasts were large.

It would be hard to explain to my office manager if we came back from lunch with large breasts in addition to the fries and a diet coke like we promised.

Reviewer: oh2bpreg Signed star Report
Date: 06/13/20 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

I understand English is not your first language. But there really isn't a story here. It's barely an idea for a story. Try fleshing out your stories. What did the people do when they turned into women? Did any of them enjoy it? hate it? What was the reasoning for the restaurant owner to turn them into women? What did each of the people look like before the change and after? Heck, what are their name?

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