Date: 06/08/20 11:31 pm Title: The Introducing of Destiny
This is not meant in a bad way but the spelling and repeating of words/phrases and wrong words makes this a bit hard to read.
Having said that, the story is good so far and I’m looking forward to more chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks :) About the repeating of words/phrases I'm gonna look at through and correct the mistakes so it should be a bit easier to read
Date: 06/07/20 11:06 am Title: The Makeover
Good story. I’m curious what an unbra is. I’ve heard of a uni-bra. Is it the same thing? I’m not sure if it’s possible to wear 7 or 8 of them at once though.
Author's Response: It's also called a nubra and I think it's the same thing. I'll admit I might over did that part 5-6 would probably be better for the look I had in mind :) my inspiration came from a YouTube video with an CD that created cleavage that way but she only wore 4 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WMx1Zr-x10s