Reviews For It's his Destiny
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Reviewer: Jindary Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/08/20 11:31 pm Title: The Introducing of Destiny

This is not meant in a bad way but the spelling and repeating of words/phrases and wrong words makes this a bit hard to read.
Having said that, the story is good so far and I’m looking forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks :) About the repeating of words/phrases I'm gonna look at through and correct the mistakes so it should be a bit easier to read

Reviewer: Terrigen Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/07/20 09:11 pm Title: The Beginning

So far so good. Interested to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Thanks, let me say so such that there comes a return of an old friend of his

Reviewer: sourmashwhiskey Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/07/20 11:06 am Title: The Makeover

Good story. I’m curious what an unbra is. I’ve heard of a uni-bra. Is it the same thing? I’m not sure if it’s possible to wear 7 or 8 of them at once though.

Author's Response: It's also called a nubra and I think it's the same thing. I'll admit I might over did that part 5-6 would probably be better for the look I had in mind :) my inspiration came from a YouTube video with an CD that created cleavage that way but she only wore 4

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