Date: 06/11/20 05:15 am Title: Epilogue
This was a wonderful ending to the story, but I can’t help but hope that there will be a sequel; after all, the covens enemies are still out there.
Author's Response: Thank you, so glad you liked it! Rounding it out into a trilogy is certainly possible. I do have a few ideas, if there's any interest. You're right, there's still danger lurking.
Date: 06/04/20 08:45 am Title: The flip side
I feel like this Emily/Kara drama is a little repetitive with the same concerns being brought up in almost the exact same way without any resolution of tension.
Author's Response: Yes, Emily is really struggling with her insecurity of not appealing to Kyle/Kara in the same way, and finding she's maybe not as enlightened or empathetic as she'd like to be. It's going to take her a bit longer, but there will be some resolution, hope you'll stick around for it. Thanks for your thoughts.
Date: 06/03/20 05:32 am Title: Her place
Continues to be a good story, but Emily got a little annoying these last two chapters.
I understand Emily is upset and feels like she lost her love, but it’s almost like she doesn’t want Kara to have any moment of joy at all until she reverts back. Even if Emily joined the band, and things got reset, where is the harm, it would still be reset. Same with the dress. So why not let Kara make plans, and find a way to enjoy herself for the time being.
It’s almost like she would want her to cancel her upcoming gig, and stay locked up in Emily’s bedroom. Kara is excited for that show, and hopefully Emily doesn’t get upset that she is having a good time. Kara deserves to be happy as well, and not sulk all the time. If this were real life, Emily would drive Kara away, if she isn’t careful.
Author's Response: Yeah, she's letting her guilt and apprehension get the better of her. But she at least is conscious of it and trying to overcome it. Thanks for continuing to read!
Date: 06/02/20 06:34 am Title: Terror
I keep waiting for the next chapter to come out! I literally check back like twice every day :) Keep up the good work, the character development here and the worldbuilding is so interesting. It's really an inspiration to me.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm thrilled it keeps pulling you back! So here's two more chapters for you!
Date: 06/01/20 09:50 pm Title: Terror
The worst part of this story is the wait between chapters. :)
But the cliffhangers are great. I am wondering, did the spell also leak out of the house and affect anyone in the neighborhood? I like the twist with Kara, and I am wondering if that’s who the title is referring to.
You definitely have my interest and look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad it's holding your interest. I'll be posting daily, so at least the waits won't be too long!
Date: 06/01/20 05:29 pm Title: Terror
1. Kara is really cute, and something tells me the spell on him before was simply shattered by all this and made her true form come out.
2. I know it probably wont happen, but I'm hoping that if Fiona/Emily can't 'fix' Kara or she doesn't want to be fixed, that she can make it so that they're both still into girls so they can stay together
Author's Response: Thanks for coming back for the sequel. Stay tuned!
Date: 06/01/20 08:10 am Title: Reunion
This just turned out very interesting,eagerly awaiting whats next.
The twist with Kyle - you know how most boyfriends end up kinda awkward and out of focus in these stories? Well maybe with this he can get more of a centerplace.
Author's Response: Thanks! There will be a lot of focus there in the upcoming chapters.
Date: 05/29/20 10:32 am Title: Pummelled
This an awesome follow up from the first storyline, awesomely addictive and interesting, in ways much better than the first storyline. I can’t wait for you to post more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm thrilled you're liking it! I intend to post updates daily.