Reviews For The Vacancy
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Reviewer: Day Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/26/20 01:05 am Title: Chapter 7

Loved it! Nicely exposited, great dialog, a few fun reveals along the way. Funny last line! Although it leaves mysterious how the previous marks got there, or why Tom did wait so long to start the swap.

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/23/20 11:13 am Title: Chapter 1

Liked the story. I too liked that you didn't go for the darker ending.

Reviewer: CHRIS2K Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/22/20 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 6

great job

Reviewer: H20_Mel0n Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/22/20 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 6

Awesome story but a real shame that there were no hot scenes. The premises were really intriguing:P

Reviewer: Faye Kistry Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/22/20 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 6

This is a wonderful conclusion to a fantastic story. I really enjoyed it from beginning to end. Thank you.

Reviewer: gothicshark Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/22/20 12:36 am Title: Chapter 6

ok, that was good.

Reviewer: Tau Gamma Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/21/20 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Delightful and smoothly written.

Reviewer: Quintilianus Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/21/20 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm really glad that you didn't go for a darker ending. I'm happy that they ended up together in the end. Nice to see all the guilty parties got appropriately punished as well. I'm also a bit of a sap for happy endings.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/21/20 11:55 am Title: Chapter 6

Awesome storyline! Excellent work

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