Date: 06/20/20 06:05 am Title: Chapter 4
Good chapter. I like the pace at which Sydney is adapting, and relating to Nick.
I was concerned at first about nick throwing fastballs at Sydney, then I remembered girls play fast-pitch softball.
I think this is shaping up to be an epic story. Can't wait to read more. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it so much.
Date: 06/07/20 06:50 am Title: Chapter 2
The wish was so loosely worded the stone had many ways to interpret it. I think Sydney could have fared a lot worse.
I'm waiting for her to find out who her boyfriend is, since after all, a girl that pretty and popular must be dating someone. Probably the quarterback of the football team.
Great writing, you have excellent style, pacing, and descriptions. It does seem, however, a little rushed. I would have liked to read more about Sydney getting ready for her 'first' day of school. Hair, makeup, initial body exploration.
I also can't wait to find out what else Sydney is involved in. She must be a cheerleader, be on the prom committee, etc. I think Sydney is going to find out she has a very busy social life now. Thank you for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I apologize for skipping over most of the morning routine, but I truthfully just didn't know how to properly write it. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!