Date: 05/15/20 08:45 pm Title: (Un)usual day
Hm, TGStorytime doesn't seem to like me using tags in comments. I meant 'br' tag, which breaks a line
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! And also thanks for the heads up, I added line breaks. It looked fine in Word, so I didn't recheck afterwards :/
Date: 05/13/20 07:02 pm Title: (Un)tapped knowledge
Promising start. Your prose could do more to flow for the reader, but it is certainly not a big issue. I am looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks you ! I'll try to make everything flow more smoothly in the coming chapters, we'll see how it goes :D