Reviews For Omens of Change
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Reviewer: sourmashwhiskey Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/25/20 01:14 am Title: (Un)exceptional Demonstration

Loving the conflict Ryan is facing. Great story! Sounds like Sarah may be a new ally to help Ryan accept all his/her new challenges. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: EevieBeevie Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/24/20 10:39 pm Title: (Un)exceptional Demonstration

We all need great friends who we can trust. Thanks for the chapter, a good one!

Author's Response: Thank you ! It was one I really was looking forward to, ever since I laid the general storyline

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/24/20 08:42 pm Title: (Un)exceptional Demonstration

I'm a sucker for a good magic story.

Reviewer: EevieBeevie Signed Report
Date: 05/15/20 08:45 pm Title: (Un)usual day

Hm, TGStorytime doesn't seem to like me using tags in comments. I meant 'br' tag, which breaks a line



Author's Response: Thank you for the review! And also thanks for the heads up, I added line breaks. It looked fine in Word, so I didn't recheck afterwards :/

Reviewer: EevieBeevie Signed Report
Date: 05/15/20 08:44 pm Title: (Un)usual day

Looks good! By the way, your story is a bit packed right now, I suggest separating paragraphs, I think it's with the
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Reviewer: Foundling_Fae Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/13/20 07:02 pm Title: (Un)tapped knowledge

Promising start. Your prose could do more to flow for the reader, but it is certainly not a big issue. I am looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks you ! I'll try to make everything flow more smoothly in the coming chapters, we'll see how it goes :D

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