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Reviewer: flowerboy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/20/20 06:22 am Title: Cortney

I really like this!! I tend to prefer lots of action packing in stories but I really love following these characters and this in particular seems right up my alley! Really looking forward to more!

Reviewer: murakumo Signed Report
Date: 05/20/20 10:32 am Title: Cortney

I like that Mary/Mark has some spiteful feelings toward the Ex. I hope that part of the slumber party is going to be a revenge planning session.

I adore the loving teasing that Mary/Mark gets from both Lyn and Jazz.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story! As for revenge, I will neither confirm or deny it. You'll have to read to find out!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/14/20 04:49 pm Title: Living Limbs

I really hope u r not going to keep the mannequin theme going for more than a couple of chapters, the baby one was bad enough! Please the first storyline was awesome, please give us a fun and moving storyline. Thank you so much for your time

Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't like the content of the last story, or the premise of this one, but I do plan to explore Mark's past and his relationship with both Jasmine and Lyn, as well as adding an element of danger later after the event. However, on that note the mannequin thing is kinda going to be most of this story, so if that's really not your thing, you may not like this story. I hope you give me a chance to entertain you though. Thanks for reading so far!

Reviewer: murakumo Signed Report
Date: 05/14/20 08:25 am Title: Model Sister

Ooo very interesting with the idea Jazz and Lyn playing together, fingers crossed to see something come of that nugget. But I'm really interested in seeing what might happen with Mark/Mary's getting some retribution on the Ex, or seeing just how dark and twisted Jazz can get if her lamp were to end up in the Ex's possession.

Reviewer: ginger Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/13/20 07:13 am Title: Model Sister

Hello!

I’ve loved this story since Day 1. My only issue with it lately has been with the lack of sexiness. I’m (personally) not entirely into baby roleplaying, so that has pulled me out for a while now. But this new line of thought with the sister has me pulled *WAY* back in again. I’d love to see some fun changes with her!!!!

Regarding age play— I do love that. But I’d like to see Mary as a teenager or as a little kid or something. Not in a sexual way, but in a way that lets the character explore who they might’ve been growing us as a woman.

Anyways! Thanks for writing this and I’ll be checking in probably every day for updates!! Take a look at Autumn Wind if you haven’t yet and give me any critique you can offer if you find the time.

-ginger

Author's Response: I assure you there will be far more sexiness in this one. There wasn't anything I wanted to do as far as that with a baby, and let's be honest, there's only so many ways you can describe a feeding or a diaper change. As for ageing up Mary and giving her a look at what her life could have been, I had Three arcs planned before I decided to split them into separate stories. You should be happy with my plans for the next one.

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