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Reviewer: redactedthegreat Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/17/20 12:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story! I love your writing style!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: NurseTingle Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/14/20 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very hot story! Hit soo many buttons. Loved the progesson to a super hot scene.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Primus Signed Report
Date: 05/13/20 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved your story. In the same way that I loved all the previous ones. I like these cute endings. I hope you keep making more stories like that

Author's Response: Thank you. I enjoy these kinds of endings as well. I'll keep writing them as long as I have the idea for it and people still read them. :)

Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/12/20 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww, so sweet, and nicely written lovemaking as well!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: HeatherNYon Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/12/20 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sweet. I liked that Oscar got changed, rather than Leo, who seemed like the nice guy there.

I wish that I could give bonus points for the Corgi.

Author's Response: Thanks! I thought it was fitting the person who made the wish to "get laid" would be the one who got TF'd vs the other.

Reviewer: Quintilianus Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/12/20 03:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww, that was cute. I love that they both got someone that they can be genuinely happy with, and they both seem a lot better for the experience.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Amanda R Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/12/20 12:52 am Title: Chapter 1

This was a pretty good read. Wish you would consider doing a bit longer a story though where you let things develop a tad slower. Still, enjoyed this for what it was.

Author's Response: Thank you! This story was definitely long enough for what I wanted to tell. If you're looking for something kinda like this one that develops at a much slower pace, I highly recommend checking out my story 'A Swapping of Roles'.

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