Date: 05/09/20 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a pretty decent one-shot. You've got a pretty good style of description going on where it mostly consists of description, but ends up feeling like you've heard the feelings of the change. If there is anything missing, I think having Thea describe herself at the end could really cap it off. Even so, this is really enjoyable (for its length) and you should feel happy with how well it works.