Date: 12/06/12 06:06 pm Title: Part 1
Terrific story. I very much enjoyed reading this story and its 2 predecessors. You obviously put a lot of work into weaving the various plot elements into a coherent whole.
I must say that I didn't understand using 3 real people in a fictional setting. I had the feeling that there's an explanation out there in the literary world that I'm unaware of. You could have had the villain's role without naming him after a real person, and the other 2 characters were minor.
I would very much liked to have seen what happened when Odin met the Sons of Odin.
Those 2 quibbles aside, you put together a wonderful story that was fun to read. I checked the site daily hoping you had posted another chapter. Looking forward to your next story.