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Reviewer: gothicshark Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/05/20 11:00 am Title: ...And Another Begins

thank you for the chapter. ... Interesting. Also, so the UK? They are not as nefarious as the US, so that was a bit of a shock.

Author's Response: Most welcome :) Yeah, considered US, but I live in the UK, seemed more natural to me. 1. Yes, that's part of the idea I have in mind, "who'd expect the British eh?" And 2. Just because it maybe and a UK company, doesn't necessarily mean they are based solely on English soil ;)

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Date: 06/01/20 05:33 am Title: One Story Ends...

Thank you for the chapter. And finally, we now have a size comparison. So your dragons are about 7 feet tall on hind legs. Since you never really gave a clear description of them I've been trying to piece it together, these are clearly not the 100m dragons of most Fantasy books and video games. Oddly though medieval paintings showed dragons to be smaller than a Horse. See: https://www.nga.gov/collection/art-object-page.50662.html

yes, I'm a Dragon fangirl.

Author's Response: I shall work on the descriptions a bit more, sorry about that :S but yeah they are very roughly only slightly larger than humans, having longer necks, wings, tail and generally being very lean and muscular creatures just makes them appear larger anyway. Where I'm leading to with this, it wouldn't make much sense if they differed too much in size from humans. You're most welcome though, I hope you are at least starting to enjoy this as a warm up for the main show :)

Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/04/20 05:01 am Title: Dream state

Awwwwww

Author's Response: I will take that as good sign, thank you :)

Reviewer: gothicshark Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/02/20 10:35 pm Title: Dream state

Well, that was sweet.

Also, they are reptiles, or well reptile adjacent at least so maturity would be much faster than a human, while life spans for some reptiles can be much longer than humans.

Author's Response: Thank you :) ...and people say I'm heartless :D This 'short' story, didn't think it would be right to throw 2 main characters in and not really give them enough background, especially the way I intend things to go ;) And yeah, that's kinda what I'm getting towards, as I say, the Draconians will get a proper run down at some point :)

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/02/20 06:49 am Title: Scheming

A very interesting start at least, will track, I did notice a couple minor spelling errors, but nothing earth shattering.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review... yeah, my spelling and grammar is not the best, never has been... I keep going back and noticing mistakes. My problem is, I'm writing this on the fly, not copying and pasting or uploading like I probably should, and due to my work at the mo, not having much time to proof read until later :/ My bad, will try and work on it :)

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