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Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/04/20 05:01 am Title: Dream state

Awwwwww

Author's Response: I will take that as good sign, thank you :)

Reviewer: gothicshark Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/02/20 10:35 pm Title: Dream state

Well, that was sweet.

Also, they are reptiles, or well reptile adjacent at least so maturity would be much faster than a human, while life spans for some reptiles can be much longer than humans.

Author's Response: Thank you :) ...and people say I'm heartless :D This 'short' story, didn't think it would be right to throw 2 main characters in and not really give them enough background, especially the way I intend things to go ;) And yeah, that's kinda what I'm getting towards, as I say, the Draconians will get a proper run down at some point :)

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/02/20 06:49 am Title: Scheming

A very interesting start at least, will track, I did notice a couple minor spelling errors, but nothing earth shattering.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review... yeah, my spelling and grammar is not the best, never has been... I keep going back and noticing mistakes. My problem is, I'm writing this on the fly, not copying and pasting or uploading like I probably should, and due to my work at the mo, not having much time to proof read until later :/ My bad, will try and work on it :)

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